Illegal Premature Beginning to My NaNoWriMo Novel

At 4:53 a.m., June fifth peered through the Vagrihaven haze and considered its pale reflection on the sweeping Myrthe Alfons Complex and the needlelike Qadir Tower. Georgie Sanchez, resident meterologist for Channel 1 Morning News whose real name is Linette Gouldensteiner, added "Looks like another cool, partly-sunny day!☺" to her Teleprompted script.
At 4:54 a.m., Hope Lécuyer, lowliest clerk of the Vagrihaven Civic Records Department by day and top student of VCSU Law School by night, jogged past the break in the trees of Heritage Park which afforded her a brief glimpse of the forest-green Bridge to Success reflected in the sparkling Campbell River.
At 4:55 a.m., Tobias Rask, former ward of the state whose application for a janitorial position at City Hall was approved just yesterday, threw himself off the Bridge to Success and experienced a brief high before the air pressure rendered him senseless.
At 5:01 a.m., Hope jogged up the steps of her apartment complex only to be knocked down them again by its explosion.
At 5:02 a.m., Tobias woke with his face in mud at the bottom of the river and knew he was right about Heaven.